I don't know who gets the job of writing the blurbs for bands on leaflets, but I certainly hope it's not their only job. The Cedar are playing Moles Club on Wednesday night, and here's what the leaflet says about us:
"To call Neil Gay a singer songwriter is an injustice as great as calling a beautiful summer sunset 'quite nice'. The lyrics vary between the intensely personal & universal truththat strike a chord with everyone. When live the emotion of the song is brought to the fore producing a captivating experience that keeps audiences listing in rapt silence." [sic]
Oh those audiences. Always listing.
So, fellow logophiles, how many errors can you spot?
6 comments:
I'm not sure you need a publicist...but you could use a few commas
Wow, that really painted the picture for me. I know all the best concerts I’ve been to have involved silent audiences (rapt or otherwise)…
my head just exploded
I knew you'd have that kind of reaction Robin. Me too. Me too.
i didn't notice anything wrong with it. what?
(see, it's funny cause i'm the stupid youngest child. and i edit for you...)
Neil Gay can't go on facebook. Neil Gay has a face.
Neil Gay owns a book.
Can I write some lyrics for you (sorry I guess kinda off topic really)
really.
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